Bury Me To Eternity Comments

This poem was shared in 2009. But its message is still relevant. Kindness and compassion to fellow beings make life worth living.

Bury me to eternity...it sound like fallen angel crying...You created beautiful poem, even though u decorate it with pain and put many accessories of darkness but it still make this poem as a drawing of white heart...this is good, keep writing but to bury you to eternity? this is too early, but treasure yourself save people from calamity..make this life more secure! Hopes never fade..happy always okay! .. that's good :) :)

darkly, morbidly, beautiful. thank you for sharing. :)

.....i liked this :)

well written mind opener.

Brilliantly written this poem. The poetic spirit is shown very well here. Keep coming. Great

Such a poem tells one that if he/she could find love that is real, yes, nobody could find an empty space in the heart. Life would be still and each could bury himself/herself in his/her loves heart. It is a poem worth it. Splendidly set and written.Dearly cherished by me.

Not yet....not just yet. For that, wait till eternity....And no one will complain.. Cheers. Subroto

thanks for your comment. I appreciate it well, Your poem is loaded with. Its sings for beauty in its expertise of being a poet. Figurative language are there too that make vivid idea in its deepest sense.

YOU have buttery choice of words...pinkYY! ! ! I jzz melted in the heat of their strength...jzz like butter... You sre Poetry! ! ! I would like to read more from you...and know you more too...

YOur lines are vigorous and power-packed, Pink Butterfly Blood rustle down my veins Huge remorse to defeat and break Hatred and guilt all follows With this deep wound that you make

excellent very dark and worrying but so well penned. Thankyou for the comment on my Dreams od Singapore, very astute observation, hidden meanings x

Very good, hon. But I noticed only two poems? Write on! This was well done. I would like to see more. -Wes

at such a small age u write so brilliantly.... i shall be waiting for more of ur poems.. :) good work.

nice work...the poetic spirit is working...enough to be qualified to the discipline to poetry. like it...keep up the good work.

splendid poem..a deep thoughts with compassion...10

10+. Great title and amazing poem, one I'll read over and over again... keep writing! Athena *** words will change the world ***

feelings are welll expressed indeed..yet if you show your real love even da corner or even the autopsy man will not cut you...innermost feeelings r well expressed..see you...10+++

Magnificent poem, moving lines.10

u are truly remarkable.. beautiful write..as lovely as a pink butterfly..brilliant bravo