Bury Me Deep Comments

its a very beautiful poem nicely penned

Wow this boggles the mind. I love the repetition of a single line or phrase; done well it carries the poem along like an enchantment, and you've really exceeded the form here with these words. I like it much.

A poignant piece but very well written....your imagery is perfect.

This is an amazing write, I am very impressed and keep reading it over and over.

A great poem Jack. I don't think it needs revision. I enjoyed all the poem, but particularly the third verse. Personally, I'd go for cremation. Best Regards Steve