Sunday, February 26, 2006

Bursting Comments

Rating: 4.6

Would that I could
Break from this gray
This changable mass
This lump of clay
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Tara Crown
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Theresa Rayman 12 March 2006

This poem is alive with wonderful imagery. I truly felt every word. Excellent work! Blessings- TGR

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Linda Hepner 27 February 2006

This body costume unzipped! Wonderful! And hummingbird warm... you have to see one to feel the sunshine, Linda H.

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Scarlett Treat 26 February 2006

Holding hands with the stars - what a wonderful thought. Bursting seems such a good title for this work, because you can almost feel the desire to reach, stretch, go further than you have ever been before. Love it. Scarlett

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