Friday, October 20, 2017

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Oscar had always admired Amanda's shapely thighs.
Her beauty made him high.
One day she gave him a chance.
His wood almost burst through his pants.
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Lamar Cole
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Sister Frances 21 October 2017

Ok you win the award for words I never thought woyld feature in a poem....stinky Toe jam..brilliant. It has inspired me to go write something silly :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2017

Interesting write. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 20 October 2017

Stinky toe jam spoiled the mood.. Nice

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