Saturday, April 11, 2009

Burnt To Ashes Comments

Rating: 5.0

You burnt me, a wound of incomplete,
you remind me, a memory of indiscreet.
Deeply cut, all the way through my heart,
cold-blooded hands tearing me apart.
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Maya Hershey
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Noha El3wdy 21 May 2009

great words well done i liked it

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Deva De Silva 24 April 2009

Urgency in your tone in describing a wound deep... liked it.

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Yvonne Selase 14 April 2009

beautiful sad poem maya. you couldnt have penned it better. you still remain my fave poet in peomhunter and soon to be the whole world. keep it up. yvonne

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