So much stronger,
piercing through and in...
Deeper no longer sensing
as I feel it all begin.
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Thank you so much Bill and David. I wish I could be given an email when someone comments on my poetry, so that I could reply quicker. I appreciate your comments very much :) Kim :)
This is so beautifully crafted it is almost self-contradictory. A very cherishable work.