Wednesday, January 13, 2021

Burnt Garlic Comments

Rating: 5.0

See how fast the onion burns
Faster still the garlic turns
From a nice yellow tinge
To a smelly black singe
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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2021

And fascinating rhyme scheme

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2021

Lovely poem. " The fire was too hot/ I couldn't cut out the rot"". The metaphor strikes at the right spot. Marvellous.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 July 2021

A true brilliantly rhymed poem about a burnt garlic. Indeed after having read this fantastic poem, I can read that smell, since I know too how that smells.5 Stars full on Top for this impressive poem

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