Friday, January 27, 2012

Burnside Tree (Eucalyptus Camaldulensis) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sensors trip the doors,
consumers are exchanged, a
Breath of the world rushes in,
sighs, and is truncated.
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Danny Draper
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Chuck Audette 12 July 2012

I think that I shall never see a poem as lovely as a tree. However, it sounds like this tree is a bit of a love-hate relationship for you. Still a good poem, though.

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Karen Deeks 14 March 2012

Solitary confinement indeed, how do we expect the very same therapy indoors (in huge concrete planes) when we strangulate them in artificial air and light... I'm now feeling terrible, I am the grim reaper of plants (family joke) and I've just remembered to feed them. Their daily fight for survival down to a fool like me., , bravo to a beautiful piece which may remind me of my duty.., thank you. Karen

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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