Saturday, December 12, 2009

Burnning Down Wonderland Comments

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Let's burn down wonderland
for no such tale exsist.
No happiness,
no heart felt scenes.
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Jessica Elizondo
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Realistic yet dismal outlook on life. I feel like the world is just a fake sometimes. Like nothing good is left anymore. I really like your poem, there seems to be a lot of angst in it.

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Serenity Prayer 12 December 2009

the world can be a wonderland or a burned down forest, it all depends on how you look at it. good job though.

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