Burning With Love Comments

Hmm you have done well to express your love in this for one to whom you cannot convey those feelings to. The turmoil within comes through while the passion rises more and more each day. The resolution held though does not sway one from ensuring that the secret is kept, and whatever it takes, it will be held hidden within the aching heart. Well worded, well expressed with a good flow and rhythmn. What I also loved about this is that it showed two lots of images of a love between two friends, male and female, and again, between two of the same. Interesting. Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you