Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Burning The Old Year Comments

Rating: 3.6

Letters swallow themselves in seconds.
Notes friends tied to the doorknob,
transparent scarlet paper,
sizzle like moth wings,
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Naomi Shihab Nye
COMMENTS
Mahtab Bangalee 08 November 2020

Where there was something and suddenly isn’t, an absence shouts, celebrates, leaves a space. I begin again with the smallest numbers./// the world was always modern in own time; was plentiful always; no scarcity the world had, but always everything was, is and will be decaying; at ending of anything begin another thing to born; the end is no end but starting of others; beautiful philosophical poem penned

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 November 2020

'So much of any year is flammable, lists of vegetables, partial poems. Orange swirling flame of days, so little is a stone.'... are nice lines. Yeah, so much to do in the coming year. Nicely done.

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Bharati Nayak 08 November 2020

So much of any year is flammable, lists of vegetables, partial poems. Orange swirling flame of days, so little is a stone. - - - - - An amazing poem- - There are so many things we forget easily- -But a small amount of things we do not forget and carry them with us as we welcome a new year.

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Bharati Nayak 08 November 2020

So much of any year is flammable, lists of vegetables, partial poems. Orange swirling flame of days, so little is a stone. - - - - - An amazing poem- - There are so many things we forget easily- -But a small amount of things we do not forget and carry them with us as we welcome a new year.

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M S Newhadney 08 November 2020

The imagery and metaphor in the poem are noticeable but poem as a whole lacks unity. it seems different parts of different images hardly put together. it may belong to a special style I don't know much about.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2020

Saying Goodbye to the Old Year and Welcoming the New Year in such a scintillating flamable way. All sizzling like moth wings. What a greatest joy! CONGRATULATIONS being The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hooray! 5 Stars Full Vote.

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Savita Tyagi 08 November 2020

Only the things that I didn’t do crackle after the blazing dies. What a marvelous poem! Naomi Shihab, you take the crown today!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2020

Swirling flame! ! ! ! ! ! Able to marry the air. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 November 2020

Good poem. Then the following year a list of new year resolutions and things to do but by year end the whole process repeats encore. Thats humanity

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Susan Williams 31 December 2015

Oh, my, I love the way she expresses herself- So much of any year is flammable, lists of vegetables, partial poems. Orange swirling flame of days, so little is a stone.

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Manonton Dalan 31 December 2015

hmmmm I will have to do a lot on this end of year day...thanks

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Ramesh T A 31 December 2015

Goodbye to old year and Welcome to New Year with Love!

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Kim Barney 31 December 2015

My favorite lines: So much of any year is flammable, so little is a stone.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 31 December 2015

Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Ten points.

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Naomi Shihab Nye

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