Sunday, January 1, 2006

Burning Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cry for your stupidity
Weep with innocent eyes
Drowned in Life's tempest
Miles Underground
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Bradley Dean
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Cynthia Aluning 01 January 2006

silence contributes to a lot of concentration, the opportunity to be thinkful, the chance to weigh which have you done better or worst, the time to meditate, console yourself, mesmerize and reminisce the past...and oh! its deafening too. This poem was a mixture of all of the above, wonderfully versed, good rhymes. Your poems are short and slim but they meant a handful more than their actual sizes. Keep writing for more. You expressed your views that way, creative in your own style.

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Elya Thorn 01 January 2006

It's a great poem, you are very gifted! I love the use of words, and the feelings in this poem!

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