Sunday, December 4, 2011

Burning Sensation Comments

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Eyes frantically
Surge blood,
through burning tear ducts
Acidic tears flow down heated cheeks,
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Crimson Love
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Scotty Dogg 07 December 2011

Hey, Crimson. Thanks for the kind words about my 'disposal' poem. I'm reading some of yours now and I like them. This one, and one about the flower blooming. I like how you work your name (Crimson) into a lot of your stuff. I also like how you refer to yourself in the 3rd person at times. Good ideas and funny too. I'm thinking you may be a vampire though, what with the blood obsessions and such. That would be cool if you were. I've never known a vampire personally. By the way how did you get on the top 500 poets? You're good enough, but I just wondered how one gets afforded that honor. Thanks again for your comments. Scott.

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Robert Roberts 05 December 2011

sweet love how you express your words

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