Friday, August 25, 2006

Burning Poems Comments

Rating: 5.0

I do what I can,
I smile amid the lonely city blues
While people I love disappear
In life’s transitory foggy mist.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sal Carter 09 October 2006

I fall at the altar of the line 'My hazel eyes have turned grey'. Classic. I love this

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Amberlee Carter 07 September 2006

oh my god for this line: ' You won’t recognize me The next time we meet: ' and oh my god again! Uriah, man has it been too long since I've read your stunning words my friend..How do you do it? reaching into my soul and pulling out the words...I swear, if I wasn't having trouble writing such melancholy myself, I'd fight you for this poem.. You don't know how brilliant you are...these words will be remember my friend...I promise. Always, Amberlee

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Ernestine Northover 25 August 2006

Delightful write Uriah, a splendid read and a beautiful poem to consume. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Uriah...so glad you're here.

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Sandra Fowler 25 August 2006

What a beautiful write! True poetry is ageless. Take care. Sandra

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