Friday, August 29, 2008

Burning Oak Wood Comments

Rating: 5.0

The oak wood burning I smelt last night
In total darkness when only a few things
Had happened in our lives
From the distant past
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Reshma Ramesh 26 February 2009

what a brilliant poem indeed......this one is a winner........it was as if i lived that moment with you..........superb

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Lynda Robson 21 January 2009

I can almost smell the oak wood too, memories relived, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 October 2008

a fine poem indeed! seems words/verses came out alike water fall..............10+

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Antonio Liao 09 September 2008

what a nice poem... so revealing... i felt so motionless.... partaking the past into the future... towards this moment....you will always be remember because of this poem....thank you...kept it up...

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Andrew Blakemore 09 September 2008

A fine piece of writing Sadiqullah, well done. Best wishes, Andrew

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Quite enchanting and provoking. x

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