The oak wood burning I smelt last night
In total darkness when only a few things
Had happened in our lives
From the distant past
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I can almost smell the oak wood too, memories relived, thanks 10 Lynda xx
a fine poem indeed! seems words/verses came out alike water fall..............10+
what a nice poem... so revealing... i felt so motionless.... partaking the past into the future... towards this moment....you will always be remember because of this poem....thank you...kept it up...
A fine piece of writing Sadiqullah, well done. Best wishes, Andrew
what a brilliant poem indeed......this one is a winner........it was as if i lived that moment with you..........superb