Burning Heart Comments
this feelin
is like a pain
like my heart had burst in to flames
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The burning desire that sparks the burning heart to a standstill.You're in the ring of fire now Demarcus.
raw emotions fill the page from a heart burning for love. absolutely wonderful, hun.
Very good, sounds straight from the heart, need to work on rhyming though, using the same word over and over gets repiticious and leaves the average reader feeling bored, but overall, very good
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7/26/2025 10:52:27 PM # 1.0.0
beautiful poem..... from the heart :) could u read my poems and comment, there arent many yet...: /