Burning Goodbye Comments
In quietness of the air
Somewhere my soul immersed within
Flowing freely touching atmosphere
Flying over the sky, low to high
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A masterpiece, great inscription the finite life that we humans enjoy!
Burning goodbye fantastic write emotion penned with aplomb unity and love thanks...regards
Wow. Wonderful write...Heartfelt and full of emotions.Each lines very beautifully portrayed like you O Soul..loved it.
Grant me your smiles something that money can't buy. This is a good line and so very true. There are so many things that money can't buy. Love, health, peace, happiness, joy, friendship, etc.. Your write is so very passionate SOUL. It takes you to deep well of love to high heights of ecstasy. Well written with lots of details.
making anyone speechless, is one of art of ur artistic mind...each & every words, verse stanza is too attractive.too majestic, too inspirational...awesome way to relish our heart, mind and soul....love
Heart-touching. You made me feel, for my friends whom I lost. So warm, yet so gentle as cool breeze.My scorching soul, now is cooling down.
this is a good write, but may i ask, what language(s?) other than English do you speak?
Absolutely beautiful write Soul, heartfelt and full of emotion.
This is just extraordinary. It felt as though I was immersed in a pool, and the only thing I could hear were your words. Terrific effort.
I found the best way to read your poetry is slowly, line by line, meditating on each meaning and feeling. The intro to this poem is brilliant and heartfelt. The reader needs and wants to hear more. The melody in your lines play out like a song and encircles the reader with colors and music. Wonderfully constructed piece.
words that dropp as dew on parched petals of soul.............
your emotions are clearly on display...with each line you sprinkle your thoughts in..fantastic
The soul presented here is universal and it will be present with someone who believes it till the last breathe. It depicts great values- loyalty and humility to lives around it.There is a wonderful picture of compassionate human soul which deeply feels for others happiness and goodness.How should I evaluate this poem. I am surely in confusion.10+++++++ infinity is ok? Rekhamandagere
The one thing that clicked to my mind as went through this write, is that indirectly you painting a picture... A true image that sincerely storms the mind and hearts of the readers, am so honored to have read this, great! Very great!
poetry from the heart, a nice person can write a nice poem, art is innocent. this is my great pleasure to read it out aloud and sir you are senior poet -please read and comment some of my poem, It will help
what a poem SIR, nice long, it is worth the trouble Sir.please read some of my poem & rate it, your comment is very necessary & important to me sir
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Together we will pass the time Till one moment has come When you leave and close the door The day when you breathe no more......so true. This is a beautiful philosophical poem presented touchingly. Thanks for sharing.