Monday, March 17, 2014

Burning Embers Comments

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Outside a car stands all covered in white,
and ice crystals sparkle like diamonds in the moonlight.
Somewhere away from the freezing cold
a fire has been lit that slowly takes hold.
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JJ Evendon
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Rod Mendieta 06 April 2017

Love the images in this poem and makes want to light up a bonfire in the middle of the forest! But is it really just burning wood and hot air? I'd say is more likely the spirit of fire itching to take a foothold somewhere within your angle of vision to inspire this poem...

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