Burning Desires Comments

The fire of desire for money, burns the fuel of health.....it is a right statement on the base which this poem is inscribed. Beautiful poem.

So true Asim ji! The greed for money is something that keeps growing. There is no end to it. I fully endorse, one has to check the desires and nip it in the bud itself. My rating for this poem in full 10. But somebody has already played a nasty trick by reducing it to 4.

you prove a great point sir FIRE BURNS till the last when we all become ashes great message here falls on deaf ears and mostly blind ones with closed eyes hope some one will wake em up great poem juicy orange like Nagpurs NICE MAN