Thursday, July 23, 2015

Burning Candles Comments

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Went to visit an old age home;
A sight distressing and heart rending;
The pride of various homes
huddled under one roof.
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Amitava Sur 07 August 2015

Very poignant and heart wrenching one, detailing the helplessness of people in their old age.

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 August 2015

Sad and touching stories, children forget one day they will also be old.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 July 2015

Excellent. A clear picture of the society has been nicely envisioned and depicted. It is a wakening warning to the brothers, sisters or daughters. Last stanza is more heart touching and patriotic. Many thanks dear madam, may God brings you burning thought........10

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A very poignant write. You selected a burning theme that should wake daughters and sons across the world. Thanks for sharing.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 July 2015

Parents look after us with great care and concern and when the same parents become old, feeble and dependent, children refuse to look after them. This is a great black Mark on humanity. O! Poetess I salute you for writing this poem and enlightening.

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