When the verso of the idyllic world enters the scene,
Each " I love you" is a boomerang of blazing spear.
The hours soar between dark clouds of frustration.
Rumbles of famished souls give birth to night owls,
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Very well written poem, the images you paint are quite unique. I love this line: When sweet words are as punctual as shooting stars. 10+
Powerful imagery Very nice