Burned Into Ashes Comments

Wonderful, absolutely brilliant The abstracted expression is captivating ..10

so so nice written and please write a poem on Break up for me i need to give it to my ex

The fire once you burned Encroached upon me And it burned me into ashes What you have done to me Beautiful. Nicely penned poem. 10+++

Memories! ! ! The past is also part of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

short meaningful hard hitting and leaves one with a void.... pain and loss...of any sort is touching and scarring well chosen words... liked

The fire once you burned Encroached upon me And it burned me into ashes What you have done to me... touching lines with great theme. Encroaching is always painful. Beautiful poem shared.