Tuesday, July 8, 2014

Burned Bridges Comments

Rating: 4.5

When I chose
To burn my bridges to you,
O what a stupid choice I made,
For I burned my fingers with the matches.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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Tadasha Tripathy 18 November 2014

I learned one cannot returned over burned bridges. May be somewhat possible when we can fly. Just joking.It's a nice poem.I liked reading it. thank you.

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Leloudia Migdali 14 November 2014

Sad but so nice a poem! Yes, one should think twice before burning bridges!

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Galina Italyanskaya 11 November 2014

A thought-provoking and, I would say, philosophical poem. Maybe it's a matter of forgiving. If it was done by mistake. If it's just not our fate, we have no need to burn bridges, we simply go away. Thank you for sharing!

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Tadasha Tripathy 03 November 2014

I learned one cannot returned over burned bridges. It's with beautiful overflowing thoughts.I liked it. May be we can fly to he dreamy person over the burned bridges.

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Valsa George 02 November 2014

Once we wreck a relationship, it is so hard to reinstate it. A thoughtless action can invite so much of heart burn! Married life needs a lot of adjustments and it is easy to burn a bridge.... but unfortunately we too get burnt! By the time the realization comes, it will be very late! A great truth put in a simple frame! Enjoyed!

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Soul Watcher 01 November 2014

A very nice Poem... Well done

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Darlene Walsh 05 September 2014

Words of wisdom, very well written. Of course, far too few people will learn this lesson before they too get burnt.

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Tajudeen Shah 29 August 2014

wonderfully put the 'realization theme' within such a cute frame. glad, delighted really to read such plain expression of poesy that prompts one to enjoy and engage. Great. God Bless.

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Maria Goodison 13 July 2014

something that we often do in life, burned bridges a good way of seeing the wrong we do like it a lot thank you

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 July 2014

Short and sweet but a Meaningful write. Very true said, it's very easy to take a decision in hurry and burn the bridges. When bridges are burnt only ashes remain, it leaves scars and one cannot go back....Poet's note did bring a better view of Poem. Thank you Sir, for the inspiring comment for my poem though I baked in an oven.

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