Saturday, December 3, 2011

Burned Alive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ash falls,
like snow around me,
today, this blood Lives,
It breaths,
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Crimson Love
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Bella Hernandez 04 December 2011

COmpletely AMAZING! can see every single line come alive! love the last stanza... so true, and we live by it all the time even those who are to blind to see that! nicely done Crimson ~Bella

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Vipins Puthooran 04 December 2011

Awesome! ! ! ! ''Burning alive, it feels like death, and smell of sorrow; It tastes of bitter regret and leaves no room for tomorrow''... Excellent penning! ! ! ! 10+++++

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