Ash falls,
like snow around me,
today, this blood Lives,
It breaths,
...
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Awesome! ! ! ! ''Burning alive, it feels like death, and smell of sorrow; It tastes of bitter regret and leaves no room for tomorrow''... Excellent penning! ! ! ! 10+++++
COmpletely AMAZING! can see every single line come alive! love the last stanza... so true, and we live by it all the time even those who are to blind to see that! nicely done Crimson ~Bella