Saturday, March 22, 2014

Burned Comments

Rating: 5.0

You claim you felt a
spark. Maybe it was
just the fire in my
hands, directed at you.
...
Read full text

Maya Hanson
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 30 December 2015

Your heat warms me and warns me at once. Your smile controls me I can't be controlled. Wonderful imagination full of desire and very expressive. thank you. tony

1 0 Reply
Savita Tyagi 16 May 2014

Great poem. Intense expressions and vivid imagination.

1 0 Reply
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

beautiful and full of imagination love it and enjoy to reread

1 0 Reply
Md Elias Uddin 23 March 2014

You said I touched you first. Maybe it was just to get away from the cold isolation sizzling under my skin. Imagination......................!

1 0 Reply
Elena Sandu 22 March 2014

Beautiful poem! I loved the wonders and the struggle to keep in control to me feels like an unspoken fear running between lines of untied pleasure.

1 0 Reply
Maya Hanson

Maya Hanson

Fenton, MO
Close
Error Success