Sunday, February 7, 2010

Burn This Place Down Comments

Rating: 4.0


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Alyssa Lynn
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Quin Bland 07 February 2010

I think I like this one a bit better than not existant. Especially if I'm not just letting my head get in the way of what the real message and who the match is. (it'd be better if I had clarification bc I'm kinda slow lol) I definitely like the chemistry line and how you used to a match and flame in this way. I also like the 'let's do it all....' line. Another good one BlackBird ;) 9.0

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