Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Burn The Candle At Both Ends Comments

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Burn the candle at both ends,
Using the fire deep inside;
The desire to do the task
Is ignited far and wide.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Captain Cur 20 December 2020

I picture a candle burning horizontally from both ends. As such it will burn more rapidly and drip much unburned wax. Perhaps that wax is the offspring of our labors, our faith and our love to be reused by others once that flame reaches the middle and goes out in a flare of glory. Very inspirational write!

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Anjandev Roy 01 December 2020

Simply brilliant piece..........thanks for sharing...........anjandev roy.

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Rajesh Thankappan 05 September 2019

Great invocation to perform our duty towards God. Enjoyed it.

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Cheryl Tutaan 01 January 2019

Let's serve God with all our might, From dawn till the sun descends; Every moment of our lives, Burn the candle at both ends. Outstanding quatrain, dear Bernard.....................

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 September 2018

One of the best poems that I have read that gives wisdom. Excellently penned. Each stanza stands out. Loved the final stanza. Yes, we shall serve God with all our might.10 and on to my Poem List.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 September 2018

Thank you, ate Rose for your priceless support.........................

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Bernard F. Asuncion

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