Friday, February 24, 2006
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Rating: ★5.0
HE has this explosion in
his head, his eyes roll
back, as he tries to sing ,
TIMES up says GOD, now
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Egal Bohen
24 February 2006
David, This is one of your best, no, your best - great! Egal...
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8/20/2025 7:55:17 PM # 1.0.0
Yep, I like this write as well. Your depiction of God, the violent turmoil enveloping the protagonist ('spits out the wreckage') - a gripping, high-impact write. Saluting you with a 10, Gina.