Saturday, November 4, 2006

Burn Out? Comments

Rating: 4.8

Alarm bells ring; rats are racing,
Dressing, eating, children-chasing,
Driving, talking, fixing, bunching,
Meeting, typing, number crunching.
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Helen Wilson
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Moffat Mbuzi 15 January 2007

Hey that was great I enjoyed it.

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Barry Van Allen 10 January 2007

Helen, Thank you! , That was fun - - - but you failed to mention the results of my first question as I was reading that ... Did you actually catch any of those children? Yea! , that's what I thought! Only when they got hungry, Right?

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Not a member No 4 01 January 2007

And now you're just about ready for another dose of the same! Hamsters on wheels have it easy. Men have it even easier. A very clear case of taking it to the limit and somehow coping, and somehow deriving fulfilment/sense of achievement. And a very clearly painted word picture of the process. Great poetry.

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Diane Violet 07 November 2006

Ahhhhh, meditation the balancing act for our day. I'm enjoying your words Helen, looking forward to reading more. Thanks, Diane

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