Thursday, September 21, 2006
Burn Me Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Burn me with the ache of a thousand teardrops
Love me with the mystery of a shooting star
Burn me with the whisper of tender kisses
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Foster Blaine
21 September 2006
Wonderful imagery and metaphor in this piece. I particularly like the line 'Love me with the fierceness of innocence gone'.. Nice write A.J.
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7/23/2025 2:21:14 PM # 1.0.0
Nice use of repetition. You could have entitle this 'Love Me' but that would have been too trite. It is interesting because some of the things you say of love me and burn me can be intertwined for other understandings; ex., burn me with the mystery of a shooting star and love me with the ache of a thousand teardrops. I like this one very much. Our inner universe is certainly a mysterious universe.