Burn In My Inside Comments

lots of emotion and feeling. an achievemnt especially when writing in another language

A very deep, thought provoking write, well penned and poignant! Full of imagery and depth which shows your great talent! Keep it up! Food for thought you are delivering here! thanks for sharing with us (The world) ! 10+++ Love and Peace for always!

Someday your burning inside will end by someone who water ur soul with calming feelings and the burn will never happen again :) till that time u must keep believe_Unwritten Soul

i like this one alot

very deep awesome keep up the good work