Wednesday, September 5, 2007

Burn In Hell, Daddy, Burn In Hell Comments

Rating: 5.0

first Im gonna tide him up in his sleep
then Im gonna dragging him to an old house
then I gonna toilette him
make him feel the pain that he made
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Jazmine Staples
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Jemarie Ragudo 26 November 2007

You probably heard this, but let me say it again. Love your enemies. Vengeance is not ours, it's God's. I don't know what you went through and I can only guess. I'm very sorry. But, hatred will not improve your plight. Forgiveness would be good for your health and spirit.

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wow, i like it, i like it alot, nt only cos i can relate to it but becos i know how you feel... don't do any of that though, cos after yu will pay the price and i don't want to see ur pretty face in jail... get him another way lol, i will brain storm with you anyday for that... awesome write tho babes Kaila -xXx-

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Sim Dan 11 November 2007

that was more rage than sylvia plath could muster - feel awfully bad for you - hope things will take a better turn

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 06 September 2007

I love strong poems like this. Maybe instead of just allowing yourself to expload you should show him the poem so he can see exactly what he; 's done wrong. Great work on the poem though, It was real strong and emotional. Keep writing.

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Flame6203E . 06 September 2007

wow i'm sorry u feel that way

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Sasha Anonymous 05 September 2007

WOW thats a whole lot of hate i hope your father isn't realy that bad and that this is just a poem but it was good

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Ying Escalona 05 September 2007

this one is really burning..writing it here, i believe reduced the tension within..let it erupt here only dear...but remember..dont let your hand stained with blood..time changes everything

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