Burn And Rage Comments

Mystery! What calls to us? What motivates us? What excites us? Explore, explore, explore. Great piece. I liked the elements you used throughout.

this mysterious piece has much mysterious lines, i'm much pleased with these lines: when the soul becomes a tongue, and fingers break windows. sweat sings on the pillow, the scent of wild flowers.

A fantastic poem, like it, a great write.