Thursday, January 5, 2017

Burn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can I burn everything?
The house, cars, blankets, the bed.
When he throws it in my face,
my gasoline tears fall.
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Rebecca Springsteen
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Anil Kumar Panda 05 May 2017

It is the feeling sometimes we all go through in life. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

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Ryson Dsouza 11 January 2017

Its very well portrayed just be yourself.. Burn all the artificial plastic smile.. Express what you feel and enjoy the expressed feeling... wonderful.. you deserve a 10... Keep Writing....

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