Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Burn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Piercing your chest with that burning pain,
Like those flames burning a candle,
No control as it burns and singes,
That scorching fire deep and intense,
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Jodie Louise Pollock
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Afzal Shauq 12 April 2010

a heart touching write indeed

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Yassar Ali 19 May 2009

Very emotional poem. Keep up the good work 10/10

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