Buried World...No World Comments

Amir, the world you refer to is the world is located in underground of the ocean water...I know the world in our life now is not good too.. Sweet or bitter is a choice and sometimes not a choice...If you like a sweetness find it, you may find bitter before swallow sweet my friend..Yes there's friend of true and Yes i talk something true. Birth of death? ? ? dont deny the life presence, coz it's still mean life of the death Death of birth? ? ? Definitely a life after death...you die of alive still lock in a life but different modes..Now time to say Yes Yes Yes, coz the dark world only shadowed by heartless people, raise and collapse the reign of darkness, bright all hopefulness...see you world will better and you will be king in your life, so order what you need! This write is not weird, it's unique...It just wonderful expression inside the emotion_Unwritten Soul

Like Aqeb said.....unique and weird...I love! ! !

unique and weird indeed. you expressed it exaggerating the flow of the tone! I took this just like a song rather than a poem. but impressive write! ! 10+

heart wrenching write..unique style

Dear Amit It is very expressive Rgds Nooruddeen

I loved the flow well written

Deceit of life so sweet to swallow Bones of lost souls So bitter to swallow Me, the world and me again...... so lovely thought and beautifully penned.. i love it red mine miss i miss you and how r u?

Deep and expressive composition my brother...your work has understanding of the traumas that life brings...the depth to your work...is an award for those who feel alone with their pain...keep expressing....it helps

All poets really have their own style in writing! Well, you got a realgreat style! This one is so good! ! ! Everything is a blessing from God. As well as emptiness and sorrow! God bless!