Buried Seed Comments

this is excellent. so much stuff going on around the poem but it keeps itself cool falling back on the true love for that calm. a rare ten from me.

Her own shyness had once been the best and most obstinate doorman. You have the most beautiful perception and depth. You write your poetry heart first....I love it [3

Another excellent write Stevie, enjoyed reading.

This is one of my favourites of your work. Her own shyness had once been the best and most obstinate doorman. Never allowing her more than a glimpse passed his wonderful facade. Leaving only the room in her mind to explore freely The line about shyness being an obstinate doorman is genius. I love the narrative style of this poem, as if I am reading the juicy part of a novel. Very true how once forbidden things can seem so much safer later on. Time gives you courage.

well mam you just got yourself a fan....yes i have become fan of yours, you write so graciously and beautifully each word described with so much passion yet with gentle touch of yours i just love it...... thank you for sharing love payal