Friday, January 8, 2016

Buried Memories Comments

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He's standing at the window; bird watching.
His shoulders drooping, his back bent;
The dark hair now grey and thinning,
His youthful energy spent.
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poppy miller
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 May 2016

Those eyes once blue! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Billsborough 29 March 2016

Poppy How well you express the desperation one feels when a loved one slowly slips away. It is very moving. Tom Billsborough

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Poppy Miller 15 January 2016

Thankyou Waseem, it was very kind of you to leave a response and it's very much appreciated.

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Waseem Sherif 14 January 2016

the sadness seeps through your words into our hearts bringing tears to our eyes. no exaggeration, believe me. thank you for sharing.

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Poppy Miller 10 January 2016

Thankyou Ann. Dementia is such a cruel thing. I wrote this on seeing a man stood by the window in the care home where I visit my mother.

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Ann Beard 09 January 2016

I feel your sadness. beautifully put.

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Poppy Miller 10 January 2016

Thankyou Ann. Dementia is such a cruel thing. I wrote this on seeing a man stood by the window in the care home where I visit my mother.

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