Sunday, September 17, 2006

Buried Dead Comments

Rating: 4.6

When Two Pieces Of Broken Heart Cannot Be Glued,
That’s When I Die Waiting For You.
Bury Me, Like They Do To The Dead,
But Don’t Put Me In A Coffin
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Irene Clark-hogg 13 February 2009

This poem is so sad. I feel your sadness coming through your words. I hope you soon find another love for broken hearts do mend. Irene *Hugs*

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Manonton Dalan 07 September 2008

rise Pd. rise from crevices of that cruel heart and show world you can survive. nice poem... thanks for sharing.

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Ershad Mazumder 07 July 2008

Preeti, I feel you and me are one.Its the same soul.

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Roy Storey 10 October 2007

Many a true word, a nice poem thank you.

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Terance Chetty 15 June 2007

Greatly said, the way poetry should be written

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Anand Shankar 08 April 2007

Hey! Emotions typified! Liked the way u wrote it, the 5 line stanza style :) keep it up

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Nikunj Parikh 05 April 2007

has a gr8 emotions to it....... it touched me..... i love this poem...i think its one of ur best! !

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Ashish R 19 December 2006

Very powerful emotions here preets.Cudnt help the 'WOW' from coming out of my mouth.Great work. Ashish.

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Shivapriya Surve 18 December 2006

How genuine, honest and powerful! Pharach sundar! !

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Arshaj Gaikwad 23 September 2006

good poem......well xpressed in a handfull of words....

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Barbara James 21 September 2006

enjoyed reading many of your poems. Barbara

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Vra Parody 18 September 2006

awesome! ....................................................the dots are just because i have to use 20 characters

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Catastrophe King 17 September 2006

You are maturing on your love poems for sure. Great going Preets! I love the way you handle your subject in the poem. But, I would rather have a softer and a more romantic end.... yours is nice too! Keep this up..... hope you did have a wonderful birthday... the last of your teens ;)

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Nalini Hebbar 17 September 2006

preets...HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ...so happy to be able to wish you on this day though a little late in the day...great poem...my! you are improving dat by day...love...nalini

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Tranquil Ocean 17 September 2006

Really liked this one....You are also becoming the Amour Queen! ! ! Love...TO

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David Tanguay 17 September 2006

I like this one very much Preets, (By the way) Happy Birthday!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 September 2006

Preeti>>>This is absolutely a stellar tap into the darkside of Poetry...My most favorite vein of verse....the abstractivity here is quite commendable, and surreal enough to scare a goth, preppie/lol! Fine Write inded''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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