When Two Pieces Of Broken Heart Cannot Be Glued,
That’s When I Die Waiting For You.
Bury Me, Like They Do To The Dead,
But Don’t Put Me In A Coffin
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rise Pd. rise from crevices of that cruel heart and show world you can survive. nice poem... thanks for sharing.
Hey! Emotions typified! Liked the way u wrote it, the 5 line stanza style :) keep it up
has a gr8 emotions to it....... it touched me..... i love this poem...i think its one of ur best! !
Very powerful emotions here preets.Cudnt help the 'WOW' from coming out of my mouth.Great work. Ashish.
awesome! ....................................................the dots are just because i have to use 20 characters
You are maturing on your love poems for sure. Great going Preets! I love the way you handle your subject in the poem. But, I would rather have a softer and a more romantic end.... yours is nice too! Keep this up..... hope you did have a wonderful birthday... the last of your teens ;)
preets...HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ...so happy to be able to wish you on this day though a little late in the day...great poem...my! you are improving dat by day...love...nalini
Really liked this one....You are also becoming the Amour Queen! ! ! Love...TO
I like this one very much Preets, (By the way) Happy Birthday!
Preeti>>>This is absolutely a stellar tap into the darkside of Poetry...My most favorite vein of verse....the abstractivity here is quite commendable, and surreal enough to scare a goth, preppie/lol! Fine Write inded''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
This poem is so sad. I feel your sadness coming through your words. I hope you soon find another love for broken hearts do mend. Irene *Hugs*