Buried Alive Part I Comments

You certainly convey the feel of being buried alive in every manner of the expression, far better than I could ever you've captured the essence of a living funeral 10+

Sad! And the poor old man was buried alive. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

What a terrible narrative? It looks like a running commentary of a dead man's journey to the grave in an autobiographic mode. My God! You have created such a fine masterpiece.

A great write.........................10