Wednesday, April 30, 2008

[buried Alive....] Comments

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He’s pale flesh, corrodes away…
A morbid stare
To he’s stagnant daze.
Black filled eyes, and painted cries.
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Empath In flames
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Amie-Lee ...... 12 May 2008

I agree. Good work: -)

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Original Unknown Girl 30 April 2008

Reminds me of a Smiths song, first line 'Oh Mother I can feel the soil slipping over my head'..... very dark poem you wrote here EiP. Your forte it seems! HG; -) xx

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