Buried Alive Comments

I am buried alive..... painfully poignant

Indeed, a good description to a depressing feeling..10++ Merna

GOOD WORK YEAH I MEAN... GREAT ;)

really good poem. what can i say, you were born to write. really good.

this is a good poem you write real well

wow what a great poem. It's so full of emotion.

man is born alone, life itself is challenging you are the warrior to win ur world, it's different to all......... I love accepting the life as it comes, so it's blessing.... in another sense I fight with relentlessly, for what I don't know dear girl, life itself is fun................ it rolls on as the cycles destiny. fine poem...... rgrds/salu

your poetry has the mystique of the mountains covered in dew.... beautiful on the outside, deep secrets within....one can imagine the hurt and suffering of those trapped by their own thoughts...a very deep poem. extreme. well done. Ash(Rishi's Dad)

I can totally relate! I've been trapped by thoughts and feelings of my own, and other things and idk if life ever gets better but it does turn around if you let it, but i can not say that you will not feel trapped at times. Love your writings can totally relate lots of luv Abby

Emo girl u r truley amazing, i have never read a poem like your, it this is deff my favorite poem you wrote, i would love if you can read mine and give me some feed back

Interesting. Lachrymose and lyrical. -J

this peom is very sad and humous

So...somehow you made it to number 1? ? I have yet to read something that warrents this? ? Maybe im missing someting here...? ?

painful and beautiful, peaceful yet peircing, it is a great and beautiful peom. keep on writing

mucho interesting................

emo.. its gush of sad tones..from within.. laced in..un explainable..pain... could it be...agonies..miseries...confronting all living beings? ? regards... sivan..

a very good thought given in this poem.

again life is what we make it. life is crap, but what makes us strong is having corage to get thru it. and its ok to cry, i feel if you cry than its more strong than holding it inside. stay srong. ill pay 4 u.

I think that this poem is beautiiful....... And you'll have a better chance to survive if you just cry bcuz crying can save you....

when burried alive let the breath be disintered that blazons so deep by life when blenched by alienation.....................fantastic display of feelings innate, lovely poem, splendid work, thanks for sharing