Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Buried Alive! Comments

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The air was thin as I breathed it in,
It scarcely filled my throat,
I thrashed about and I tried to shout
But all I could do was croak,
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David Lewis Paget
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

though i do not want to read poems with a sad or negative theme, i do not wish to be biased in my comment. I say that you write very well!

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David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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