Buried Comments

I was sure that I had commented upon this one before but there is no other comment. But this is one of my favorite poems, and it's got killer originality in every pore.

what to say a nice poem with sad words 10+++

this reminds me of 'trapped contours' i posted long long ago...

truely wonderful.i love this kind of poems ''that have meaning'' keep it up.

This poem glitters in the darkness of its own stanzas.It is powerful, evocative and exceptionally poignant. I advise this gifted poet to write on.10/10. Love, Sandra

very intense poem ma'm....brilliantly expressed...hits you deep...10

moody thoughts...well composed...well conveyed...thanks...10

a powerful mysterious composition here...great play of words.....The remains would be a feast.........10++++

excellent mysterious write, Sandra, thanks for sharing this dark story.. A.

Wow! Sandra. This is different. I didn't like her being all alone out there. There were maybe too many secrets in her poems and you have given this good strong writing.10 love Karin

buried in these lines is a story untold, only implied. very powerful write Sandra. that's what good poetry is about. however, tangible things can be buried, the spirit is above such rituals... 10 Mamta

I hope the soft copies of the poems survive.....! ! Whats all this about burying poems? ? Symbolic destruction of....? ? Cheers. Subroto

This is one of my favorite styles of poems. The characters are so somberly carrying out their (last) duties and it is all so serious..Nothing is as delicious to me as this type of plot. You carried it off with swashbuckling style! Hope some of the poems do survive, though..

OMG Sandra...this is as dark as it gets.. a poets death! ...but shouldn't poems live forever? or maybe not... but at least the good ones!

poems are born children..a fate they get from god...a very deep write friend..please take back your words