Tuesday, March 2, 2021

Burial Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let my beloved be buried alive with me,
In a grave of silence and dark solitude,
Where there is no latitude and no altitude,
Where there is no concept of the word "nude",
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bill Cantrell 04 March 2021

Brilliant love poem

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Kostas Lagos 03 March 2021

Amazing poem! Absolutely amazing!

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Red Symons 03 March 2021

Just the ticket to old man.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2021

Wow! What a wonderful poem sir! I couldn't make out what you wanted to say till I grasped the last two lines! The metaphor... beautiful woman..is the work of art which never dies..a great piece.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2021

What a beautiful poem woven by heart and mind full of love and intelligence. A poetic gem that will shine forever in our heart. To my Poen List.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 March 2021

Excellent poem. There are so many meanings which makes the poem meaningful. Now that a beautiful poem has been written for a beautiful girl she wont die...like the Mona Lisa

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M Asim Nehal 02 March 2021

Death is just a passing phase and the love is ever living, A fantastic love poem by a master poet.

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Varsha M 02 March 2021

Beautiful romantic poetry sir. Full of essence snd warmth and charm. But i felt you are mean so you want her to be burried alive but your last line is completely contradicting this. Beautiful composition.

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