Sunday, April 30, 2006
Burgling. Comments
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The burglar hides behind the shed,
He waits until we're all in bed.
And when he knows we're fast asleep.
Up to the window, he does creep.
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Goldy Locks
30 April 2006
i think the last line would be better off as 'he's ONLY activated our alarm.' other than that, i think it was good, easy read with a simple honest feel. best care, susanj
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7/30/2025 11:08:22 PM # 1.0.0
That was an awesome poem..quite humorous...I loved it!