Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Burgle-Gurgle As I Flow - Who Am I? (Limerick-19) Comments

Rating: 4.8

In jungle, chitter-twitter as I flow,
To join the brimming river, I'm slow;
On way, Bluebells in vale beam,
Lotus bring freshness to stream,
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Harindhar Reddy
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Queeny Gona 28 March 2012

Lotus bring freshness to stream, Men come and go as brutes do, but I glow. Powerful lines of the poem! Loved it. Voter 10++++

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Unwritten Soul 22 March 2012

A hidden garden in the middle of pond, an island for a guardian string instrument for a song..it's your poem he sang! .....what is it? LOL_Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 21 March 2012

i like this poem....Lotus bring freshness to stream, ..... wonderful.... Men come and go as brutes do, But I glow - nice message.... really good writing, we should read between the lines

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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