Monday, November 7, 2016

Burdens Comments

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The leaves sway quietly today
As if to anticipate the weight
Of the burden whose ragged tethers
Tear furrows across the surface
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Seamus O' Brian
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Laurie Van Der Hart 07 November 2016

Wow, talk about dramatic! Very powerful images, Neal. Great writing.I hope your spasmodic adventure is not quite as heavy as you have described. You know, of course, what to do with your burden... (Psalm 55: 22)

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Seamus O Brian 09 November 2016

Hi, Laurie! Funny how the same trial can seem mountainously overwhelming one moment, then, ah, not so life threatening the next. A Snickers Ice Cream bar can help also, I find. Of course....knowing where to cast your cares is always the primary emphasis. Thanks for reading! And always, for the thoughtful insight. :)

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