Burden Of Adam's Son.......Intertwined Life & Fate Comments

nice and balanced poem i appreciate that keep on inking mate...

you v used the kind of language that can pierce and touch the core of reader's heart...i specialy liked the phrase 'Tryst with Eden eagerly fought Kings which to end hath sought Wretched fate danced an got Banshee wails, demons fraught. Lore stealeth Adam’s son.' well if kings go in search of power, they are definitely gona get banshee wails, great and splendid write thanks 10++

'contrive flames to fashionen forms' To me this is the poet's formal education and kerner grunt-work, which allows the poet to grow in understanding and abilty to sway a body of thought nice work10+

Wonderful writing Saadat...images are great in this excellent read...Fi 10+++

Saadat, that was a very lovely well written piece, you've done a great job in it, I can see that very clearly, loved your well chosen words. keep writing