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yea theirs a big story behind this poem...theres a story behind most of my peoms

Is there a big story behind your poems. I love the first two sentences

yes its a war between my heart and mind!

I hear your voice within trying fight all these things around..So clear when it screamed in this poetry, without a sound it still clearly heard here. It is good poem Alondra, always hard anyway to fight life and get what we wanted, sometimes we need to decide what we can do if we cant get, but to stay in numb will not open a way out of anything..Like i said, i know it's hard but maybe time will heal the bruise, it's better bruise now than it bleed and scared later...We still dont know if future have bitter to go, but sure the happy moments are there also...Keep writing and think for win not to loose may you win it for true_Unwritten Soul

It seems that you are fighting with yourself through this poem of yours!